How would you categorize options for vacation planning?
How do you feel when you hear the word: vacation? Needless to say, people must be excited when they imagine vacations. However, unfortunately, without specific plans for vacations, people tend to lose their all opportunities to enjoy their vacations. This is why we need to focus on how to categorize options for our better vacation planning. To find the best fit plan for our upcoming vacation, three main criteria need to be concerned: a period of vacation, a purpose of vacation, and costs.
First of all, the vacation plan can be differ depending on the period of vacation. The period can be divided into two options; whether it is a long-term or short-term vacation. If you have a long vacation, your vacation plan can be more wide and various. For example, you are able to put a trip abroad option in your plan. Also, even you want domestic trip, more cities to visit and more flexible time management are possible. You do not need to worry about the punctual schedule, which may cause you some stress during your vacation. On the other hand, if your trip is for short-term vacation, you need to choose a few options rather than experiencing many things in a few days. For example, it is better to choose just one city, stay in a certain hotel and avoid from travel every single tourist destination.
Next, people who concern great vacations need to consider their goals of vacations. Mostly, vacations' goals can be divided into two, which one is for a rest and the other one is for sightseeing. If you are supposed to take a rest during your vacation, it is highly recommendable to find a peaceful and silent recreation area or a resort. For example, if you choose Paris or New York for your mental and physical relaxation rather than Maldives, you must be irritated from lots of tourists, noise and traffic jam. Or if you want to visit many museums and to do sightseeing as many as possible, you need to choose Paris and New York rather than Maldives.
Lastly, depending on your budget, your vacation plan can be altered. It is very crucial to make an estimated budget when you consider vacation option because there are various kinds of inns from 5 star hotels to inexpensive hostels. So, calculate how much money you want to put in your budget, and find the best place to stay, the finest restaurant to have meals and most appropriate means of transportation. It is really crucial criterion because some people have in trouble during the vacation because of insufficient preparation for their financial parts.
To sum up, we need to look up several options to prepare satisfactory vacations, which criteria contain the period, goal of vacation and amount of budget. However, we should not forget that the expensive hotels, fancy restaurants, and comfortable transportations do not always guarantee the best vacation. It is important to keep in mind that most successful vacation comes from your sufficient preparation in advance and unexpected experiences during the trip at the same time.
1st body paragraph, last sentence: avoid from travel-> avoid from traveling.
ReplyDeleteI think I said this before.. your writing has a very natural flow! So It's easy for me to read the essay :)
ReplyDeleteAnyway, your main point seems to be 'length of time, purpose and cost of vacation are needed to be concerned for a vacation planning'. I really liked your hook and New York & Maldives comparison.
But I think 'have in trouble' expression in the 3rd body paragraph should be changed into 'have trouble' or 'get in trouble' instead.
Except that, others were all nice.
After I read your writing, I think I want to go a trip. Your essay makes other hope to go somewhere because it describes a vacation very well. Your classifications of body paragraph are correct and interesting. But I only think that the writing is better when you depict a real trip as an example, for the detailed period, goals and budget. If you add your real experiences, then it`ll be much better writing.
ReplyDeleteHow do you feel when you hear the word: vacation? Needless to say, people must be excited when they imagine vacations. However, unfortunately, without specific plans for vacations, people tend to lose their all opportunities to enjoy their vacations. This is why we need to focus on how to categorize options for our better vacation planning. To find the best fit plan for our upcoming vacation, three main criteria need to be concerned: a period of vacation, a purpose of vacation, and costs.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, the vacation plan can be differ depending on the period of vacation. The period can be divided into two options; whether it is a long-term or short-term vacation. If you have a long vacation, your vacation plan can be more wide and various. For example, you are able to put a trip abroad option in your plan. Also, even you want domestic trip, more cities to visit and more flexible time management are possible. You do not need to worry about the punctual schedule, which may cause you some stress during your vacation. On the other hand, if your trip is for short-term vacation, you need to choose a few options rather than experiencing many things in a few days. For example, it is better to choose just one city, stay in a certain hotel and avoid from traveling every single tourist destination.
Next, people who consider great vacations need to think of their goals of vacations. Mostly, vacations' goals can be divided into two, which one is for a rest and the other one is for sightseeing. If you are supposed to take a rest during your vacation, it is highly recommendable to find a peaceful and silent recreation area or a resort. For example, if you choose Paris or New York for your mental and physical relaxation rather than Maldives, you must be irritated from lots of tourists, noise and traffic jam. Or if you want to visit many museums and to do sightseeing as many as possible, you need to choose Paris and New York rather than Maldives.
Lastly, depending on your budget, your vacation plan can be altered. It is very crucial to make an estimated budget when you consider vacation option because there are various kinds of inns from 5 star hotels to inexpensive hostels. So, calculate how much money you want to put in your budget, and find the best place to stay, the finest restaurant to have meals and most appropriate means of transportation. It is really crucial criterion because some people get in trouble during the vacation because of insufficient preparation for their financial parts.
To sum up, we need to look up several options to prepare satisfactory vacations, which criteria contain the period, goal of vacation and amount of budget. However, we should not forget that the expensive hotels, fancy restaurants, and comfortable transportations do not always guarantee the best vacation. It is important to keep in mind that most successful vacation comes from your sufficient preparation in advance and unexpected experiences during the trip at the same time.