When someone ask my dream job, I can not answer them because I don't have any dream job.
Because I don't dream to be in a typical job. Rather, I dream to do something. My dream is studying Entomology and do something related to insects.
I don't mind what proffesion I will have.
I can be a universitiy proffessor, researcher of Forest Service, journalist working for National Geographic Magazine.
It really doesn't matter to me if I spend my lifetime about doing something about insects.
But still, there are some qualitie that I should maintain for doing my dream thing even though I have no dream job.
I am sure that this is the most essential quality to make dream come true: Love what I want to do from the bottom of my mind.
The voice from heart is always threatened by other people.
For example, my parents, and almost all parents in Korea only want their kids to have high and stable income.
They also want high social status of their child.
When I was young, they always told me that I should become a lawyer, CEO or professor.
Many freinds of mine gave up their real dreams
They just live their life with the other people's thinking.
To love my dream and regard it as the best thing in the world keep me from paying attention to what other people say.
Another important quality is acting power.
There are so many people who plan for their future but never put it into practice.
It is easy to dream but hard to do something meaningful for the dream.
Because no dream can be fulfilled without ordeals.
Financial problem, other people's thinking may restrict dreams.
However, just doing something for dream always propose how to get over those restrictions.
It helps us to get closer to my dream in many other ways.
Overall, loving and doing is the two qualities that makes my dream a dream.
I'll never stuck into other's opinions and just practice what I really want to do.
I heard it last time, but it still makes me have an interest in your dream job. It`s uncommon jobs, like Fabre!
ReplyDeleteAnd I`m impressed by your sentences, "Love what I want to do from the bottom of my mind." Though I also trying to get my real dream job, it retouches my dreams. I think this writing is showing what you really think.
Without some spelling mistake, I think it is a perfect writing to express the topics.
I was surprised how you love studying about insects of which, in fact, I'm afraid very much! That's really great!!
ReplyDeleteYour main point seems to be "Love towards the profession and acting power are important in achieving one's goal".
The sentence that goes "The voice from heart is always threatened by other people" struck me powerfully because I personally deeply agree with this idea!
Everything was clear to me.
The biggest improvement of this writing would be making 5 paragraphs!
Also, in your first opinion, for me it seems like the topic you suggested in the topic sentence isn't the topic. The 2nd body paragraph is more about not surrendering others' comments on your dream, rather than loving your dream.
Except that, your essay was so easy to understand! I really liked that!!
When someone ask my dream job, I can not answer them because I don't have any dream job.
ReplyDeleteBecause I don't dream to be in a typical job. Rather, I dream to do something. My dream is studying Entomology and do something related to insects.
I don't mind what proffesion I will have.
I can be a universitiy proffessor, researcher of Forest Service, journalist working for National Geographic Magazine.
It really doesn't matter to me if I spend my lifetime about doing something about insects.
But still, there are some qualitie that I should maintain for doing my dream thing even though I have no dream job.
I am sure that this is the most essential quality to make dream come true: Love what I want to do from the bottom of my mind.
The voice from heart is always threatened by other people.
For example, my parents, and almost all parents in Korea only want their kids to have high and stable income.
They also want high social status of their child.
When I was young, they always told me that I should become a lawyer, CEO or professor.
Many freinds of mine gave up their real dreams
They just live their life with the other people's thinking.
To love my dream and regard it as the best thing in the world keep me from paying attention to what other people say.
Another important quality is acting power.
There are so many people who plan for their future but never put it into practice.
It is easy to dream but hard to do something meaningful for the dream.
Because no dream can be fulfilled without ordeals.
Financial problem, other people's thinking may restrict dreams.
However, just doing something for dream always propose how to get over those restrictions.
It helps us to get closer to my dream in many other ways.
Overall, loving and doing is the two qualities that makes my dream a dream.
I'll never stuck into other's opinions and just practice what I really want to do.