First of all, a managerial mind and thinking is considered as critical factor for becoming a good manager. In order to obtain those characteristics, I believe one should face various and unpredictably changing business circumstances in broader work environment. Working in international enterprises would offer precious experiences and lessons, which later effectively support running my own business. By analyzing the strength of leading international brands and weak point of uncompetitive firms, while working there, I will be able to develop managerial mind, necessarily required for operating business.
Second, prominent manager should acquire proficient foreign language skills. Despite the fact that world is globalized and English language is widely adopted as common language, countless business items and environments remain unexploited, due to scant opportunity and inaccessibility. Language is often found responsible for these phenomena. Better understanding of certain language would provide entrepreneur with larger opportunity to further partnership with locals and commence business in foreign market. This is greatly beneficial since you can effectively take over an advantageous position over your competitors and reduce potential risk that you might face at unfamiliar foreign business condition.
Last but not the least, not only professional knowledge over the business, but also the high sense of responsibility is demanded for winning manager. These days, it is frequently announced that an owner or founder of big enterprises commit corruption or unethical behavior, which depress employees and consumers, causing negative result on company. As a top administer of a firm, manager should always remember his every single behavior is highly influential. While serving my military service and practicing as rowing team member, I learned that responsible behavior and thought induce greater performance, strong bond, and higher possibility to attain self-realization. Those experiences teach me that I should always keep in mind the importance of being responsibe.
Seung Ah Lee
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your writing and I always have :)
In terms of the content, i could feel that you actually thought seriously and deeply about the matter. I could feel you sincerity and commitment.
Regarding the linguistic aspect, i don't know what to say, your grammar and vocabulary are very strong.
I respect and envy how you come up with such appropriate word choices and collocations!
I always feel like i'm learning a lot from your writing. That is why i go though different pages searching for your writing ;) Appreciate it!
Good job on the essay writing and am expecting to read another piece of your writing!
I liked your reading and you know about your current situation very well. I have read your writing so far and found out that you are able to utilize various and decent vocabulary, which I don't.
ReplyDeleteBut in this writing, I got to find a serious problem I think, that you didn't use articles such as 'a' or 'the', or plural noun forms. This happens in every paragraph of this writing especially. I didn't notice this in other writings of yours. However, this time it bugged me so many times. I recommend you go over this essay and check!
At first, I enjoyed your writing, and couldn't find any obstrusive grammatical mistake except for article such as the, a or pl. and it would be perfect if you mention some brief summary of your main three points of body paragraphs in your thesis statement.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I think you organized your 3 body paragraphs very well with your annecdotes. And you try to use different expression and voca, and it helps readers to underderstand your essay clearly. Nice essay in overall!