Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Dajeong Choi / unit 6. reaction essay / thur 34

 

Emotions in Portrait Photography

 

             Have you ever seen photos in magazines or on the web and wondered how they achieved that look. Portrait photography is the capture of a person, in which the face and expression is predominant. So the focus of this photograph is the person's face, although the entire body and the background may be included. Here are great examples of photograph that capturing facial expression of people mainly. One is "Village School" by Margaret Bourke-White and the other one is called "Children's Puppet Theatre" by Alfred Eisenstadt.

             "Village School" is a photograph that captured children in 1934. Without any background, you can feel the dark atmosphere of that age by this one photo. Children are sitting in the room which is very dark and confined. Seeing that the boy sitting in the end only illuminates by the light, it seems like there's only one window in the right corner of background. Most of the children have no signs of emotion on their faces and this makes the photo solemn and static. The two children in the second row appear confused, not knowing where to direct their gazes. However, the boy in the foreground is only straightly gazing front with a mischievous smile on his face. This arrangement draws our attention to this boy and makes us have a slight feeling of hope in this gloomy room.

             "Children's Puppet Theatre" is a photograph of another group of children which were published in 1963. You can see at a glance that this is a very dynamic photo. Children are in the outside and responding to the puppet play in very different ways. It is very funny to observe their faces. One boy has his head in his hands and frowns as if he got shocked, while the girl next to him is screaming with scared face. On the center, one child has his arms raised pointing toward and also screaming with his mouth open. The two boys in the lower right corner are gazing in awe. We can recognize children are all fully concentrating on the play and expressing emotions exactly as they feel.

             "Village School" and "Children's Puppet Theatre" both are portrait photograph that captured children as a main focus, but the mood is whole different. Children in the first photograph hardly show their emotions, while children in the second photo released their feeling freely. First one is dark, gloomy and solemn, while the second is bright, fun and loud. So the children, the main character of the photo, determined the overall atmosphere: either movement or stillness.

Like this, portrait photography conveys its vision usually by using facial expression of the main figure. Divers emotions can be suggested in one photograph and they play important rule to decide our feeling to it. So if we pay attention to those subtle different signs of emotion to figure out what is the photographer's attention.

 

2 comments:

  1. First of all, I enjoyed your writing!

    I like that you defined what portrait photography is and included brief details about it in the introduction. I think the details flew smoothly to examples. I like the sentence "Here are great examples ~ mainly." But I think it would be much better if you change this sentence into "Here are ~ that mainly capture the facial expression of people."

    I love your body paragraphs which are very descriptive and I love the way you depicted the children's expressions and gestures with many different words. Also, I think it's very good that you compared and contrasted these two photographs in the third body paragraph.

    But I think you are missing something in the last sentence in the conclusion. Since you started with "So if," I think you should finish this sentence by adding something in the end.

    Overall, your writing is well organized and easy to understand. Full of interesting vocabulary. I think you did excellent job.

    Thank you for sharing your writing!

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  2. To Dajeong Choi From Nam Alexander; Assignment unit 6. reaction essay
    1. What I like about this piece of writing is the detailed explanation of each photo.
    2. Your main point seems to be well ordered with precise explanation to each detail.
    3. These particular words or lines struck me as powerful:
    Words or lines I like them because
    …it seems like there's only one window… I liked because it shows that the author could feel the atmosphere even the small window which was not shown
    Static, solemn very good and strong adjectives
    So the children, the main character of the photo… I liked it because it shows that only children truly can show their feelings about something
    4. Some things aren’t clear to me. These lines or parts could be improved (meaning not clear, supporting points missing, order seems mixed up, writing not lively):
    Lines or parts Need improving because
    our feeling to it may be “toward it” instead of “to it”
    So the children, the main character of the photo, may be “so the main determinant of the overall atmosphere either it movement or stillness are children – the main character of the photo”
    determined the overall atmosphere:
    either movement or stillness
    5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is
    May be the last sentence of the conclusion could be changed a little bit. Some parts like “photographs focus”, because of the “pay attention” and “photographs attention” – kind of the repetition of the same word, but I think that attention is good too.

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