A life is being full of stresses. In modern society, people seem to live very busy lives since they have so many things to take care of. A busy life, however, can give a lot of stresses and put a big burden on people. These stresses mainly occur from work, relationship and an environment.
People have a job and work every day. But this 'work' gives stresses and pressures very much because of several reasons. Usually most works have deadlines. People worry about deadlines so they get nervous at almost every moment. Also, some people have troubles with their bosses. They feel discouraged when they couldn't show their improvement on their working abilities to their bosses. In this stressful working condition, people usually work too long and don't have enough time to get refreshed.
In addition, people feel stressed when their relationships go wrong. Since we live in a society, not alone, we need to deal with various people. There are many different kinds of people around us. So it is obvious that we have some conflicts with others. If we have a fight with family members or friends, we feel anxious because of full of worries and regrets. Even we sometimes hide our real feelings to avoid conflicts so that relationships don't be ruined. This can surely give stresses to us.
Lastly, we become stressful due to things from the environment such as traffic jams, noises and some unexpected accidents. We, human beings, usually feel annoyed when we can't control the environment around us. If we encounter trivial things that don't go as we want, we feel unrelieved because we are too impatient due to busy lives. You can think of many examples about this; slowly-moving elevators, distracting noises from outside, and so on. Since things like this cannot be controlled by us, we get even more nervous.
To sum up, there are so many factors that make people get stressed. Those are usually from working places, personal relations and surroundings. It seems that we may soon be knocked down, however, there are also many ways to relieve ourselves. We can enjoy our hobbies, exercise while breathing fresh air and have some fun with precious people. This is very important because too much stress can give bad effects on your health. So don't forget to relax regularly to keep yourself in a good condition!
Hi~ I really like how you organized your writing. Each body paragraph has its own thesis statement. I like the word 'traffic jams', because i know how it feel when you are stuck in the traffic jam.
ReplyDeleteThere are things i hope you to consider, it is stresses. i think you should right stress instead of stresses. And what about changing 'so that relationships don't be ruined' into 'so that we don't ruin our relationships' in the third paragraph.
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ReplyDeleteA life is being full of stress. In modern society, people seem to live very busy lives since they have so many things to take care of. A busy life, however, can give a lot of stress and put a big burden on people. Stress mainly occurs from work, relationship and an environment.
People have a job and work every day. But this 'work' gives stress and pressures very much because of several reasons. Usually most works have deadlines. People worry about deadlines so they get nervous at almost every moment. Also, some people have troubles with their bosses. They feel discouraged when they couldn't show their improvement on their working abilities to their bosses. Moreover, in this stressful working condition, people usually work too long and don't have enough time to get refreshed.
Secondly, people feel stressed when their relationships go wrong. Since we live in a society, not alone, we need to deal with various people. There are many different kinds of people around us. So it is natural to have some conflicts with others. If we have a fight with family members or friends, we feel anxious because of full of worries and regrets. Even we sometimes hide our real feelings to avoid conflicts so that we don’t ruin relationships. This can surely give much stress to us.
Lastly, we become stressful due to things from the environment such as traffic jams, noises and some unexpected accidents. We, human beings, usually feel annoyed when we can't control the environment around us. If we encounter trivial things that don't work as we want, we feel unrelieved because we are too impatient due to busy lives. You can think of many examples about this; slowly-moving elevators, distracting noises from outside, and so on. Since things like this cannot be controlled by us, we get even more nervous.
To sum up, there are so many factors that make people get stressed. Those are usually from working places, personal relations and surroundings. It seems that we may soon be worn-out, however, there are also many ways to relieve ourselves. We can enjoy our hobbies, exercise while breathing fresh air and have some fun with precious people. This is very important because too much stress can give bad effects on your health. So don't forget to relax regularly to keep yourself in a good condition!