Is it guilty to Download or share something on the internet? No one can confidentally say "Yes!" since most Korean people download music on the internet illegally. There is a big controversy about downloading and sharing music on the internet and everybody knows the right answer. It should be banned. I think Illegal downloading should be permitted because it damages both suppliers and consumers.
Some say that downloading and sharing music is not guilty. They point out that downloading is different from stealing because it could be shared without damaging the original one. Downloading never damages the original version of music, but it is still bad thing since it damages people related to the music. The illegal downloading results in a tremendous loss in music industry. Guess you own your entertainment company. You hired a talented producer, singer and composer. They should be rewarded for their work. If no one buys CDs or pay for MP3 downloading, it means your company can not make profit to pay for the workers.
This is not only loss for suppliers but also for consumers because free downloading on the internet can lower the quality of music. As illegal downloading proliferates, more and more entertainment company get into lean period. Entertainment companies will only concern the appearance of singers to achieve popularity which brings more money with less finacial investment. They will reduce money to the producer, composer because it costs relatively higher than plastic surgery for singer or glittering costume.
Some people argue that buying CD or paying for MP3 costs a lot so they have no other way but to download music on the internet. However, I think it is much better to pay for the music you want to listen to rather than download it illegally to feel anxiety. In other words, you just pay some amount of money to download or just listen to the music online and this is much cheaper than you expect. For example, you can download 40 MP3 files for \3000 in Mnet.com. This means you can download with only \70 for each one. This is quite reasonable and most people can afford it.
Illegal downloading is so common that people even do not feel guilty when they download music on the internet. However, downloading and sharing music on the internet havs negative effect on both consumer and producer. Moreover, buying music file on the internet is not that expensive. So we should always remember that downloading and sharing music is wrong.
First, I agree with your statement.
ReplyDeleteYour examples are interesting and it makes statements much stronger. And your conclusion is also effective as it restate your opinions.
In my opinion, however, I hope you change the sentence 'They will reduce money to the producer, composer' to 'They will reduce money to the producer and composer'
because it might be confused.
Thank you for sharing your writing! I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteFirst, I think the phrase 'downloading on the internet' is used repeatedly in the introduction. Maybe it would be much better if you change into other words.
In the conclusion, I think you should add 'for free' in the sentences because you don't mean just downloading music on the internet is wrong but doing it for free is wrong.
I see that your writing is well organized and your point is clear throughout the writing. I can agree with your opinion. Also, I like that you showed some examples to make it easier to understand.